HELP ME

by DANI   Nov 9, 2005


Someone hear my cries of help,
i made a shout,
and i made a yelp,
my best friend used me to get to her boy,
she messed me around,
and treated me like a toy,
my mum is depressed,
and its making me worse,
the girl i looked up to,
turned me to look at the floor,
my friends at school keep showing me the door,
someone hear these cries for help,
they are only small,
so you might not hear,
these cries are from my heart,
Ive been crying since the start,
my life's messed up and i keep on doing these things,
and i am happy with the pain it brings,
so here is my plea,
someone look into my eyes and see,
the little girl inside of me,
shes crying for freedom,
shes crying for pain,
shes crying for the happiness,
that never came,
someone help me to see my life,
kill me,
help me,
relieve me...

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  • 18 years ago

    by ..::*Broken*

    Oi oi dani... im here :):) cus i love ya.. and im here 4 u 2 talk 2.. u no that dont u?? and u have spoke 2 me.. and i hope dat has helped... helped take the pressure off u 4 a while.. one day everything will srot out.. everything happens 4 a reason.. every step we take changes our future... take that in ur stride dani... and use it.. use it to make ur life better.. ok?? think about it...

    And always remember all the advice u gave me wif everything 2 do with dan.. and all the s*** i was havin over one person.. and, just apply some of that 2 urself.. ok.. u said i dont need him.. he's bad 4 me.. he's only hurting u.. y cant u see that.. think about it hun :)

    xxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by DANI

    Tell me why you are commenting on my poems....why do you care!!! YOU DONT!!! you did use me...zak said that you only said sorry to me cus u were in a \'\'weird mood\'\' and how can u say that you took him back after all he did...he said \'\'oh hayley 7 months must be summit special..\'\' wat a load of bull!!! hes your problem...if u werent wiv him then we wudnt of fell out....i said last time he was bad news...and u said that u wud of got together wiv him with me or without me...i did tell u he was trouble...why do u keep talking to me wen u dont even care....you \'\'wish that the stuff wid my mum wud stop\'\' and your not even here for me to cry on!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley Marie

    I never not ONCE used you dani, NEVER!!! you got me and zak together, so how can you say that?! I havent done nothing of the sort how the hell can you say that!
    Im sorry if you feel i have used you but i never have done. But if you was a real best friend couldnt you have just been happy for us?! Instead of saying i used you.
    Im sorry this stuff with your mom is still going on, and i really do hope it sorts itself out. But in the mean time dani, you dont need to say that i used you.
    Hayley-Ree x

  • 18 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    Wow this is really good
    nice job
    keep writing

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