Great poem and thanks for commenting on my poem!!!!!!!!!!

Oh wowwww!!!! i read the first one, and then this! both are really expressive and beautiful. consider yourself really talented! keep it up! ;) 5/5

Omg this poem is amazing... your rhyming pattern was flawless and I really enjoyed this one. It's really sad though... so I hope that you're okay. Keep up the great writing hun!