I Don\'t Know

by Lindsey Bosse   Nov 10, 2005


There are tears,
of my demise,
screaming fears,
I can not hide.

Then smiles,
I am happy,
took awhiles,
to be laughing.

I don\'t know
why I am now,
the way how,
I do not know?

There I cry,
sofly for them,
feel broken,
away from him.

Then I laugh,
full of such glee,
why with them,
I have laughter?

I don\'t know,
why I am now,
the way how,
I do not know?

*Haha, can you belive how sad, I am trying to work with sylabols, please comment and help me!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    I would change the second stanza to then the smile, I am happy, Took awhile, to start laughing
    the third
    the way to gain, i dont know, to get the same, i cant know
    the fourth i would just put feeling broke
    fifth, i am laughing
    then the last one just keep it different from the second...

    so all of that is what i would do, but it is your poem therefore i actually have no say whatsoever. it is actually good, though each line is really short.. easy for sylabols. hehe. i love you.

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