Tired

by *rach*and*bee*   Nov 10, 2005


By bee

i feel tired
yes life has finally won
life has made me tired
it has crushed me
i have fallen down
and i have refused to get up
refused to carry on today
i think i will just sleep
for now
and then tomorrow
i will face this cycle again
......

or maybe
I'll shake it up
maybe I'll break your preish circle
of neverendingness

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  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    Hey...thanks for the comments...ummm things seem to have gotten misinturpreted.....this is not i repeat NOT a poem about death this is about a poem about being sick and tired of living day after day....when live is repeating is self.....
    oh the last word is never-ending-ness. luv bee

  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    Awww bee.....we've been thru so much...c'mon...nopey nopey ur not quitting, we got some places to go, people to see, lives to learn, hearts to break, and always....bootys to shake.
    no sitting down....nuhuh...not for us...ill drag u if i have to...don't make me do it....=D
    hey great poem...just one question....whats that word on the second to last line....i don't know what it means....either that or ur making them up again....lol
    i LUV u....muahhaha
    *kisses ur wrists*
    life is precious
    -don't waste it-
    xoxo~always~rachel

  • 18 years ago

    by goddessofsong

    O bee....don't be sad. read emile's worth e-mail. you will always be valued