Comments : Unrequited love (my vile disease)

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    You. Will. Feel. Love. Don't. You. Dare. Give. Up.

    xxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Awww thats really sad, i loved the ending of it, i understand the pain in this poem, great work

    ~**Lucy**~

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Broken~And~Twisted

    Thats really good

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Another amazing poem. I saw your rating, and I can honestly say you deserve more than that - and I will be more than happy to raise it a little... The poem itself was to me flawless, you got out so much feeling with your words, your statements and your repitition of lines. This line will probably forever be burned in my mind:
    what is the point of love if i will never feel it?
    As I know there are many (I used to be one of them...sort of still am) that really do feel this way. It's a heart wrenching feeling, and my hopes is that you don't actually think this way. Incredible poem. Welcome to my favourites :)

  • 17 years ago

    by ** plum snow **

    **everyone feels love at some stage, the person u love must just be the wrong one **

    gr8 poem =]

    check out my poems, im going thru the same thing, maybe i can help?

    comment on my poems if u like dem xx