Hey this is so so sad, i hope things are okay xxx

I'm okay with the poem except for the part where it mention about the skin peeling off of the arm....

I think that was too graphic for my taste.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Well done Anthony, this is a write that I can relate to well.

regards,

Steve

Insanity is the first word that popped into my head after reading this poem. If I felt those emotions, and go through all of those events, I would definitely go insane. Awesome stuff my friend, I must read more.

I really like this. its so graphic and the descriptions are brilliant.

hope your ok

Great piece! The dark undertones are so vividly conveyed! Well done~Holly

I loved your poem. it was so descriptive and graphical. great job. i can totally relate, hope you`re ok!!!
Tr!c!@

The description were intensifying and real good i really liked this poem
take care
HS

Great poem anthony...
it is dark..fits perfectly..
hope things are ok xox

Good poem mate...trappedxoxox
could u comment on mine if u have time

Good, good, i like it, i like it...and obviously so do alot of other people, lol. i liked the way it flowed, and the wording was quite intelligent and well used. i'm not sure which stanza is my favorite, they are all equally as good.

Brad

P.S. i don't mind if you want to read some of mine, lol...but if you do, please vote and comment, thanks

Wonderfully written, this is the kind of poetry that I love to read.. I hope you'll read some of mine and tell me what you thin.. 5/5 gj!

Amazing poem....it felt like their was alot of thought go into it

This is a wonderful poem, very nice. 5/5

Oh wow sweetie that was an AMAZING POEM! You had great dictions and it's flow was wonderful! You expressed you topic passionately and well. 5/5!

-Mikochan

Wow, brilliant piece of writing Anthony. You have a way for words, talent dude, you have talent