Very good!!! Sad, but I love it!!! 5/5

0hh h0ney. t0uching lines. very well written.

Thats really good! i noe exactly how u feel im a "lonely girl" 2

Wow hun this is deep, I loved the verse "When you look into my eyes
what do you see
pain and tears
raining on me
" it's so me right now at the moment, this poem is fantastic it really showcases your amazing talent, keep it up my lubb, take care

Great poem i understand!!!!!!!!!

This was a great poem it shows how talanted you are. its very touching and alot of people can relate to it keep up the work.and dont let ne one bring you down

I hope the girl is not cover in pain anymore...I hopw I can take her pain away...but u hev 2 free the pain urself...don't let bad memories haunt u...but 2 always remember the good memories...

I love ur poems..u have very good work..keep it up

Loved the poem! It's trageic but well written! Good job!

Awesome poem.. I really feel it. Good job!

Thats really gud! its sad and emotional! i luv it so baaad!

Awwww this poemz so sad im gettin teary eyed lol keep up the gud work ur doin great!!!!5/5

I lyk dis poem alot. I can relate with it. Well i can relate with basically almost all of ur poems. I felt the same way lyk i couldnt move on with out him. N i wont deny it when i drwon myself with the memories i feel the same all over. I wish i could give ya more than a 5/5. Take care.
-HUGS N KISSES!

I love it girl. My friend wrote something similar, but she didn't think it good enough to make the site. Personally, I think it was my fave of all her poems. Her name on here is she. She has lots of good stuff. Check it out! You guys have a similar style! :D

Oo awesomee poem!
ii cann relate!
really goood poem!

Amazing...tnx for comment 5/5

Another great write...i know how u feel! the first time you get your heart broken is the hardest, but it's for the best in the longterm! i hope writing peoms helps, i know it helped me! really good poem, thanks for looking at mine and check out some more if you get a chance, i know i will! amy xx

I LIKED THIS POEM.

Very nice. i can relate to this poem a lot.. i rated this a 5. my fav lines were

I had him
now he is gone
and without him
i cant go on
i need him
and now he has left me
i feel like I'm nothing
I'm missing something
inside of me

keep it up!!