Opening My Eyes

by ChildofGod87   Nov 11, 2005


Looking at you
Seeing your face
Very cute and
So much care
But yet you hide!

Why hide when
Your trying to be you
When all there is
Is love or just
Wondrous feelings
Between us two!

You can doubt
You can lie
But you'd be
My crush I have had
In a long while!

You make me smile,
You care to help,
Your there if I'm alone..
Sitting and crying,
You talk to me to calm me down,
Your so sweet to me
And I thank you for that
I needed this person to come my way
Especially by knowing you quite a while!

Between us is good friendship
Both of us like one another
Both live not too far away
So, let's take a step in the "Real World"
((No Pressure, Yet))

® Copyright © Sedusha 2005

-x-x-Dedication to Austin-x-x-
*~*Thank you for reading, Feel Free To Comment/Rate*~*

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  • 15 years ago

    by Soulful Ensemble

    I like the style you implement with such a pretty flow. Its perfectly worded and I think it shows.

    What sweet person; this guy you write about. At least going by your words.

  • 17 years ago

    by Alyssa

    Hi!..I loved it..And thanks for saying I wasn't dumb...You seem like such a great person..I love all of your work!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara

    The last couple lines in each stanza are a mouthful and dont really flow maybe try to get your point accross in another way!!! but other than that i really liked it great job!!!!

  • Cool poem

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Awww sooooo cute!! hope everything works out! 5/5