by ChildofGod87 Nov 11, 2005
category :
Internet slang /
love, romance
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Looking at you |
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I like the style you implement with such a pretty flow. Its perfectly worded and I think it shows. |
by Alyssa
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Hi!..I loved it..And thanks for saying I wasn't dumb...You seem like such a great person..I love all of your work!!! |
by Tara
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The last couple lines in each stanza are a mouthful and dont really flow maybe try to get your point accross in another way!!! but other than that i really liked it great job!!!! |
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Cool poem |
by aDORKable x3
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Awww sooooo cute!! hope everything works out! 5/5 |