Broken Record

by emile   Nov 11, 2005


It\'s just like you\'re a broken record
You keep on playing in my mind
I\'ve tried so hard to forget you
But I can\'t leave the pain behind

Seems that everything you\'ve done
Has affected me today
And I\'m only so messed up
Because you\'ve made me this way

Your words cut me deeper
Than any blade ever could
I cant believe I let you hurt me
Even though you said you never would

I was so blind to all your mind games
Your pathetic tricks & lies
But you\'ve tripped yourself up now
I can finally see through your disguise

Your fake love was like a dagger
It tore right through my heart
I should of known you would betray me
And now my soul has fallen apart

So pull you\'re knife out from my back
Let me fall down on the floor
There\'s nothing you can do
That hasn\'t already been done before

This is my first attempt at writing I usually just read so i would appreciate your comments!! thanx emile XxX

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  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    I didnt get my friends to stick up for me or write you any comments. i dont think i should f**k off because i havent done anything wrong. ill tell ya what why dont you just stop reading MY poems and you wont have to keep telling yourself i have copied them.and then we wont need to be arguing like this.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    I love that poem!! it's rlly good and ive experienced it well. keep writing..thx for the comments...
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    This is a good poem, the rhyming is good. i also wanted to let you know that i havent copied any of my poems from anywhere else but u can think what u want. good job any way XxXxXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by *BeAuTiFuLlY*iNaDeQuEtE*

    Hey this is really well written but i fink u crossed the line abit tellin my m8 she copies poems i no she writes all her own stuff!gr8 job tho
    XxFeEBeDeExX

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