Vampire longing

by Rosechild   Nov 11, 2005


Lover of the this night
Come take away this light
I have waited for more than a day,
In the darkness is were you stay
People have warned me of your kind
but i can't keep you out of my mind
I want you to come back to me in the cloak of night,
Take your wings and take flight.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dani Ward

    Hey, i really liked this poem. i'm a vampyre at heart, and would love to truly become one. anyways, great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    'Lover of the this night'
    Should it be '...of the night' or '...of this night' ?

    'In the darkness is were you stay'
    Is it '...is where you stay' ?

    'Take your wings and take flight.'
    I find that 'take' seems weird here, maybe spread would be a better word? I'm not sure, maybe it's just me, if that is so, ignore me. =)

    I like the way this poem rhyme and how it links from line to line. Dark with a hint of mysterious. I've enjoyed this. =)

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