The walls are closeing in

by ♥and its just an Untold Love story♥   Nov 11, 2005


She's locked inside the room
and the wall are closing in
she thinks that she's going to die soon
and this battle is one she can not win

it's getting harder and harder to breath now
and she's slowly letting go to it all
and everything to her is just so wow
she's going into a deep sleep and her down falls

her eyes are shutting and she can't fight back
she's losing her spirt and is giving up
she trys to fight but they always attack

not done

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell

    Wow amazing, yet again filled with emotion.
    truely awesome
    cant wait to read the finshed version.
    keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Not done yet? Wow...I thought it is...very nice...since u r not done yet...when u finish it...tell me...so I can come back and see it again...

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