Woah, that was really greatt
Lovedd it!
good work:)

I really enjoyed this different rhyme scheme of yours. How delightful and wonderful a piece. Yet so interestingly dark and imaginitive ... That is the "break up." Or the fear there of.

The begginning is absolutly wonderful.

The telling of a tale, of a burning book. The book is manifest, real. And it is something like a novel - that is love. It is as if you are reading another love story. Sort of whimsically flattered to read it and have it mirror your self. Yet it burns ...

Mellowdramatic and delightful gorgeous. Beyond a 5/5.

Dont worry about that yet allie!
just enjoy it while its happening.

"Stare past the pain dear
For its moments are fleeting
Tangled within your tears
A mere hiccup in your heart"

that stanza really jumped out at me!
beautifully written

Baby i love it...dont think about the break up just yet....just enjoy the moments...

Lovies,
Ish

This is so awesome. I am loving your poetry, and I wish you the best of luck with your guy.