Wow thats really powerful! great poem hun
luv courtie

Now that poem was powerful! I am blown away by it! They only thing I can say is to try and use more commas and periods other then that... it was truly amazing! That opening line
*Another fight tears us apart
Not wanting to talk
Or have a heart to heart*
That is so powerful! I love that part=) great job!

And thank you for your comments on my poems. I am also very Appreciative with ur comment on *For those who think they know love…* u rated it for the poem even though u didn’t agree with it, and I admire that=)

~Megan~

This is also a great poem, add punctuation tho, it helps the reader know how you feel more. Because it shows the speed in which it is supposed to be read!!
XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
~~Sweetie

Let the feelings out great job

The poems great really well written and expressive

Gr8 poem hun but they never win keep ur head up high and keep fightin for what u wnt!!! xxxxxxxxx