by kraz33 beautiful Nov 13, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
As her eyes began to fill with tears, she thought to herself "How could she say something like that?" Her mother said these horrible, cruel words "You are worthless, you are killing your family, look what your doing to everyone" Her dad even said they would sleep better if she left and never came back. She had heard those things so many times. She made mistakes but she learned from them, she has been trying to make her wrongs into rights but her mother still says those things. Finally one day, she couldn't take it anymore, she cried more than she ever cried before but this time, she wanted every little bit of the blade to go through her wrists and through her heart. She went to her room for hours and sat in a little corner and cried her eyes out till they felt likt popping out of her skull. Her breathe quivering. No one bothered to check on her, not even her little sister who meant the world to her never once knocked. So she sat there crying and telling God to take her or give her the strength to take her own life, knowing life would be better without her. Every little horrible thing anyone has ever said to her echoed in her head. Finally she stopped crying because she had no more tears to cry, her breathe stopped trembling. She slowly got up and laid in her bed, her head on the tear stainde pillow from the other times she had cried, there she laid with her eyes open not blinking once. There were a few last movements, she closed her eyes and put her face buried in the pillow as she had her last breathe...she took her own life with a blade to her wrist with a note next to her with bood on it, these words written: "know me as the girl who took her last breathe for your happiness...." |
Omg i know the feeling. i felt the emotion in this one. great work please keep writing!!! |
Wow this is a good one....rly. love the story nice prose form! LISSA |