Comments : Winter Dove

  • 15 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    This has a wonderful lyrical quality, and while you use very modern language and idiomatic phrases (dotted line, for example), there's an archaic rhythm that I enjoy. Enjoyed this greatly.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cimara

    Haven't read one of your poems for ages and ages, and ive really missed reading them!! its good to see you're still as amazing as ever. keep it up hun xoxo

  • 14 years ago

    by Unknown

    Hey i likey this poem it sounds like a song and stuff and im going to right a new poem(its really a song) so plz comment on it ok

    TheRealMan

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderfuly done!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Ophelia

    Beautiful!!! i love it!

    alwayz,
    *ophelia*

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Exquisite poem, wonderfully done, a shpw of excellence!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    Great rythm and rhyme in this poem! though the story itself told a great story, portrayed as a metaphor with the classic end ryhmes...

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet

    I like tha way u rhyme in this 1 5/5