Closing My Eyes

by Princess09   Nov 15, 2005


Smiles and tears,
Happiness and fears,
Be with me,
Throughout my years.

Hold me close,
And let everyone know,
I am yours,
And you won't let me go.

Close your eyes,
Lean in for a kiss,
Lip to lip,
Heavenly bliss.

Call me your baby,
Say I'm your doll,
I'll close my eyes,
and leap to fall.

Say you'll catch me,
When I go down,
You won't drop me,
Or let me crash to the ground.

That's all I need to know,
For me to go,
I'm closing my eyes,
For now I know!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    'Throught my years.'
    Is it 'through' ?

    Hey I really enjoy this, it's sweet and it's cute. It's kind of lyrical too. The words are easy and pleasant, and it expresses what is intended.
    'Or let me crash to the ground.' I feel that this line kind of disturb the flow a little, but maybe it's just me, if that is so, ignore me. Nonetheless, I really enjoyed this. =D

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    That was beautiful writing. it actually felt like u were standing there saying this to him and then falling into his arms. great emotion in every word.

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