Love the title it's really creative! nice poem it's very well done and describes beauty! keep up the awesome work my friend!

~Jacklyn sorry for the short comment, i have a lot of hw to do tonight!

I love this poem..it showed so much emotion and passion...WOW...I Loved it..Love Always...Joclyn

Holly, you so ROCK! Great poem!

This is absolutly wonderful, you ARE a great poet, I am really amazed at how good this is. Wonderful job.

~Emily

Holly ,
Such a passionate,romantic poem ..
I just loved the title ....Dang I just loved the whole thing ..
Beautiful Holly

Amazing! 5/5

Damn.. good job holly! 5/5

Holly,
Absolutely beautiful....passionate and romantic piece.....great job Holly, you are so talented....

Love ya, Ann

This is a great poem, good title, great ryhme, it's a very loving poem that you didn't hide any truth from, you said it without having to say it. . .it's great. . . 5/5 keep it up. .
much luv ~*~Amber~*~

Holly, one of your best. I'm amazed. Good job, sweety.

And I'm comin back to p and q.

i love you.