Comments : Building Of Disaster

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Very advanced writing, your talent is quite stunning! v.good poem, i liked the ending especially. keep it up,
    emma xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Damn I don't get it! grrr. I'm trying to understand, but I am just failing.

    What I got was "building something up from the nothing, and than seeing it fall down" I'm sorry if i got that wrong. But you are very talented, cause it's very beautiful writin! Keep up the good work!
    And don't feel bad cause I didn't get it, cause I'm just lil stupid me :P ghehe

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Wow, Exceptionally outstanding. I loved every bit of this poem it's just so unique & in it's own element, I think it's fantaastic, well done mydear, take care

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I think I get it...or maybe I don't...yet I still think it's awesome...the usage of words...I really don't know how to descibe it...and hmm...don't worry...sometimes I get confuse with my own poems 2...haha...dunno y...just do...neway...to get the forum award...oh that...hmm...join the discussion...whether it's the club discussion or the site's...just post ur thoughts...or stuff u want people 2 c...well that's it...

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Lol..um matt....u're not supposed to write challenging things like this for me to read:(!!!
    ha...nah i'm kindding that was exceptionally awesome:P
    Man i look up to u..(although i;m probably taller than you in real life...hmmm)...
    lol..sorry weird mood:P
    u're awesome matt..don't ever change...
    U're on my profile now:)
    take care xoxoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Woah...gr8 poem, keep up the good work and i wont be surprised if you go far.
    -elizabeth-

  • 18 years ago

    by Paul Morris

    Great peom
    yeah its confusing but under the confusion it is understandable
    either way i like it and it flows really well with the rhyming shceme you chose goog job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    This is different... very interesting... i had to read it 3times for me to be able to understand it... i liked it... very neat...
    hope u pass by mine sometimes...
    votes and comments much appreciated...
    much love

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    I liked this a lot. Not really confusing, to me anyway. 5/5

    -Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by jodie

    WOW!!!! love it you've based it on a greath theme, cheak out my poems i think you may enjoy them
    jodie
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kathrynn

    Amazing poem..
    you're a very talented writer,
    hopefully i'll see more of your work on here!!

  • 18 years ago

    by yolande the dreamer

    I think im going to read this one a million times, but even if it is hard to get, i would probably read it a million times just because its good......very good...i love the different words...

  • 18 years ago

    by *puddle ov blak tears*

    I luv'd ur poem......u've got talent!!itz so different 2 everyone elses poems and datz makes it even betta keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nahibi Maldonado

    I like it...even though I don't get but...it's good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Sad...but really good

  • This poem is awsome, it's so deep, and can take on so many different meanings, depending on how u look at it

  • 18 years ago

    by YOUAREFU*KINGRETARDED

    Wow, this poem is a big pile of crap. Gross, you suck dude. 1/5 Your mom's a S L U T, go to hell 1/5

  • Holy *some word i can't say* you are one heck of a writer.. I'm jealous... teehee.. you have a really goood way with words.. keeep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    I can't really form a story or meaning from the start of the poem, however the ending does strike something to me. But still, I can't really pen down my thoughts on this poem, there're many ways one can interpret from this poem. I decided to see it as a so called 'perfect' life created by one hands and also it's being destroyed by that same pair of hands. Though I'm not sure if I make sense here! lol. Anyway, this is one poem that makes you think and you wouldn't mind reading it over and over. This is a masterpiece. Thanks for sharing. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    I'm probably being thick, but I don't quite understand it, stunning imagery though, keep it up!
    Luv Helen xxx