Draft

by *rach*and*bee*   Nov 17, 2005


By:*Rachel*

Impact
like a kick in the gut
reality comes crashing down hard
suffocated

Fear
lingering in the air
reflected in the young eyes
tears are falling

Time
oh so precious
and oh so little
tick-tock tick-tock
Departure

Goodbyes
lives alter
hearts crumble
Gone

Wrong
this is WRONG
screaming at nothingness, that's all thats left behind
reason?

stand
against this evil
this destroyer of dreams
this DRAFT

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    AWESOME!i love the structure great job raxcel my sexy

  • 18 years ago

    by goddessofsong

    Wow, it was like a slap of cold water, so blunt, yet elegant