Dance darkness dance

by *rach*and*bee*   Nov 17, 2005


By:*Rachel*

tsunami
hurricane
tornado
weather vein

spin, spin
blurry world
shadows falling
as i twirl

deep withing the eye i sit
pondering titles, this one fits
master of destruction; i wish it wouldn't
tried to suppress the raging storms, i couldn't

spin, spin
blurry world
shadows falling
as i twirl

*its not finished, i am stuck and just wanted thoughts on it so far. if u have ideas, give me a shout, id love to hear them, thanks
~rachel*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    I like this very much...hmm..ideas.........SHRUG. im sure wahtevya do will be awesome..im not in the most poetic mood lol..

  • 18 years ago

    by goddessofsong

    Ok really good so far but what is it about exactly? is it the problems w/ nature lately? or something more personal? cause if it is only you can finish it