Broken Hearted

by Lilninja   Nov 17, 2005


It glowed more than the suns has ever
then I heard those words and lost you
It cracked and lost a little glow
A day or so after you wouldn't talk to
me and i thought you hated me
It cracked even more and got even
more dimmer.
You wont take me back now and I
understand why, we might talk once in
a while but it ant the same as it use to be.
People ask and ask but your answer remains
no and to refuse the question
it cracked even more until its almost
covered with cracks and the glow is real low, cant
even tell glow still remains.
Now i must tell you the most bad thing I
have ever told you.
it will break in haft and loose its glow.
As you have guess it is my heart that has
been broken by the one I loved
Never felt like it was whole to start with but
I guess now I know i had a heart, i only
wished i didn't have one cause i would have
never fallen in love with you and my heart
would have never broken into pieces
and lost its glow that was bright than the
sun itself.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    I liked it, I think it could of been a bit better if you seperate the poem.

    EX:

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    (Have a space in between)

    *****
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    other than that I liked it. It has somewhat of a good flow, keep writing, I'll be sure to read somemore.

    Peace, Joe