Love's No Paradise

by TJ Bake   Dec 16, 2003


I don't understand you
You said your love was deep
But how can u be with him
And expect me not to weep
I love you so deeply
Oh why can't you see
That I would do anything
Just ask and you shall receive
I'd wait on you, hand and foot
Just give me that chance
To make this Love work

I've loved you since the start
I just can't let you go
I've done it once before
And that's where I was wrong
You meant so much to me
But I didn't realize it then
Now all i can do is wonder
what might have been

You've moved on with another man
I know my love for you will never end
I wish for you to be happy
That's all I've ever wanted
If being with him makes you so
Then I have no choice,
But to let you go

This is surely not by will
But by my love I have for you
My heart will beat no more
My heart will stay still
For as long as you're not mine
My only option left is to die
Cuz without you in my life
It's surely no paradise

i think more can be added so put comments for agreat ending.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Your poem is Good. I don't think you need to change it. There is nothing you could do to make it better then it is. It is really a very sweet poem...Kinda reminds me of mid summer nights dream where no one loves the one that loves them!