This poem is realy good, and the only poem about suicide that the person who is commiting it is being regrettful.. very good i gave u a 5!! mayb u can read some of my poems sumtime and rate them too.

DiNaAa

Hey dis is a wicked poem!!! keep up the great work!! try chekin mine out too and tel me wat u fink!!:)

O.O wow...that was awsome..5/5 keep it up gurl...keep that chin up..and take care.

much love,
becca

Wow..i dont even know what to say..that was so amazing..i really hope you are feeling ok..i mean..as best as you can...wow..
sammy

This is what i think so many people must think about just before their suicide succeeds, an amazing work

Loved the poem.
Nice. Had feeling.
Hope you're okay. Keep on living gurl.
Laterz,
Shirlz

This is a very good poem

Omg that just about made me cry!! I loved it sounded so flawless!! x x x Jessica x x x

Wow tht was a really good poem. I've tried some things like that before...keep up the good work

OMiGosh!!! This is such a great poem!!!It was well written, flowed perfectly, and an amazing feel to it!! 10 if there was one!! love the way you write!!

Lots of Love,
Mandie

Omg, thast amazing, it really is 5/5

That was great! I've been there and it's not fun, and you put it perfectly in your poem! Congrats hun!

Very powerful poem, it flowed so beautifully and it really sent a message across, i especially liked the last part. Good work and keep it up 5/5

This is one of the best poems iv read!..... and most the time its tru... keep on writtin cuz ur really gud.

This was so well written, an amazing piece of work, 5/5
take care

holly

Hey nice poem.. i hope your okay. keep up the good work.. and i was in that situation once.. i never want to go back to that again.

xoxo
ciara

Your poems are amazing! The flow is beautiful and the meaning true and heartfelt! Thank you for allowing me to read such a beautifully written piece! Love ya, Tess xxx

Hey wow great poem!!
Check out some of mine plz comment!
Xox
Talisa

Wow thats a great poem i love it

Wow nice poem i like it alot and i hope life treats you good...suicide is not the way