Hit Back

by aaron c s   Nov 18, 2005


I finally did it.
I hit him back.
I thought i was stronger.
I really did.

When my fist collided with his face,
It was a feeling i can't describe.
A feeling of finished,
Like i finally won the race.

In my glory i was ignorant.
I didn't see him get up.
As I turned around,
I saw in his eyes, his want.

As i taste my own blood,
I think to myself,
Why did I have to be brave,
Why did I try to be a stud.

I sit her now,
Forever in despair,
Wondering when it's over,
And how long will God let this allow.

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  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Hm.. You have amazing storyies behind your poetry..you just need to work on flow like I said once before. I also know what your going threw during this stage as well. When this happens to me, I get extremely outraged. I do things I regret..and things I sometimes don't. You have to do what you think it right, and what will help you in the long run.

    -Jennifer.

    Overall Rating: 3/5

  • 18 years ago

    by cant sleep

    Well...i got all of it till the end. whats up with the mom thing? i like it though. well written!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Good one friend! Interesting poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by happyGIRL

    I loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    GOOD ONE I RLY LIKE IT THOUGH I DONT UNDERSTADN THE LAST LINE ABOUT YOU MOM...SRY BUT WHAT I DO UNDERSTAND RLY CAPTURES ME. GOOD JOB. KEEP WRITING, PLEASE! XXlissa

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