Let It Be

by Tine   Nov 19, 2005


Tears rolling down my face,
and all I hear is
Let It Be
Nobody knows or understands
All I wish is for my heartache
to leave me alone
But while I'm trying
people say
Let It Be
softly singing a song
while watching to the rain
crying rivers
The song I sing
Let It Be
Whenever The tears I cried
hit rock bottom
another piece of my mind
turns to gray
But,
as in the song certain persons sang,
I decided to
Let It Be
That will clear my mind...

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  • 17 years ago

    by beth

    This poems ROCKS.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sirkka / Selene

    Very very very gooooood!!!!!!!!
    Thanks for you're comment
    keep up the good work!
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Hello!
    I liked this poem, the idea was good, but it didnt have a good enough flow and It didn't seem like one of those poems that dosn't need a flow, ya know?
    Maybe try make the sentences the same lenght and put a lil flow/ryhtem into it and it would make it easier to read.
    Id give it a 4/5.. but I dont vote lol :D
    Well done, its a good start, just dosn't seem completely finished xx

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