That was really good i like the way u just let it flow
Mandy

Great poem, diction and flow flawless. I really like how you are able to so adaptable in your different styles of writing, I admire that.

Thank you for your comments. When you get chance please check out my latest write "Love and War" be interested in your opinion.

Look forward to reading more from you.

Regards
Hayley

Good

Good poem piglet

Cute...u and Robert rocks...man....this is good...very good indeed...one of the best no doubt...5/5

Amazing poem... the rhyming pattern was perfect and I loved every word of it. Great job guys!

Hmm, when u say ''me'' i never woulda guessed it ment you! lmfao this poem is so awesome i love it! awesomeness! lmfao u and robert write good poems together u'all should do it again

Awesome i think its a great poem. neway great poem. loved it, and if its real you;ll regret it more if you dont do anything about it. wondering do u write as a duo with switchblade often?

Aww good, look forward to talking to you soon too!

Aww i luv this poem i can so relate
xoxo
corrina