Can you see me

by sammy jo   Nov 20, 2005


Can you see me mom can you see how you have made my life hell can you see me dad how you hurt me when you talk about her can you see me world that when you gave me to my mother and father that you were going to make my life be like SHIT! can you see me now that i am sitting in the bathroom on the floor cutting myself with my razer so that the cuts would not be big and so that people would not see them can you see me god? now that there is no love in my life that i am dieing with every breath i take? can you see me school that you are taking to long can you see me razer that you are letting me feel something? can you see me teachers that you are not helping me can you see me brother that me and you both love each other and you want me to be a different way and i want you to be a differnt way to? can you see me because i cant? all i see is a young women confuzed with the whole world and mad and wanting to let it out but does not know were to go to let it out? can you see me?

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  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is so sad. Its really good though.

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychel

    I like it alot! keep writing! ill look foreward to ur next poem