WOW!!! Great Job, You have been piecing it together for couple days and asking me what I think and I think it's a work of art. Like I said you can picture yourself in the room so well and understand the dimenations of everything very well. Sounds like a good place to be!!! Great Job and I hope you get a good grade on it at school!! Good Luck hun
Luv ya Julie

Great job

Great job JO i loved it i felt like i was in ur room looking at everything u described wow keep it up xoxo laura marie aka sweets xoxo

Thought it was really good=D I dont really like this line though
*When you sit on my bed you just seem to sink into it like quicksand, it is so comfortable that you never want to leave it; you just want it by your side at all times.*
Kinda because it refers to the bed as quicksand, and that you would never want to leave it... I dont think many people want to stay in quicksand lol. But I guess it just depends on how u take that line. Other then that and even including that it was really good! Good Job!

~Megan~

That was like a poem ive never read b4...yet it was interesting. u used gr8 description words....keep up the gr8 work...5/5!
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