Too little time

by SammiBABY   Nov 21, 2005


Given the chance to take in your grace,
I would see the beauty of maybe one spot
But to take in the loveliness of even your face,
Would take much more time than I have got.

Given a moment I could tell of one thing,
Which I love completely about you,
But to tell you of every joy you bring,
Would take more than a lifetime to do.

Given the option to reveal my affection
I could write my thanks to you in rhyme,
But if I wanted to show in your pure perfection
Even forever would hold too little time.

*For someone I love completely*

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  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    A t0uching piece. g0od j0b 0n this als0 hun. very well written. im enj0ying ur w0rk! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I have given u 5/5 and then i want to comment also...
    its been approx 5 mins and i m speechless..i dont know how to appreciate this little wonderful poem.
    m sorry but i m out of words..just amazing

    keep it up and all the best

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Very powerful poem... I loved the pattern, and it flowed flawlessly. You did a great job, and you should be proud!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Great work sammi...really pretty like :) xox rc kisses

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristy Green

    Cool. i like it. the ending is my fav.. keep up the great work and check out mine too..

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