Very nicely written. I loved the way it flowed and your choice of wording is amazing. 5/5 none to less.. xx:

*> : PainOfOne -- blaine

GREAT poem i really enjoyed reading it!

Brilliant poem great flow and expression

Hey beautiful em! loved it like I Loved ALLL your poems. but this one... had just such a great flow and meaning and wording it was just great. I really love ur writing hon keep it up! luv ya *hugs*

Hey beautiful em! loved it like I Loved ALLL your poems. but this one... had just such a great flow and meaning and wording it was just great. I really love ur writing hon keep it up! luv ya *hugs*

Hey beautiful em! loved it like I Loved ALLL your poems. but this one... had just such a great flow and meaning and wording it was just great. I really love ur writing hon keep it up! luv ya *hugs*

Great poem, great flow.. it seems everyone has that problem of hiding who they really are and how they feel. thanks for sharing =)

The use of imagery and metaphor is detailed yet simple to understand it is brilliant. well done.

Wow that's amazing i know exactly how you feel :\ this is an awesome poem :]

That's so awesome! it flowed beautifully. bit depressing but thats what makes it beautiful. nice choice of words. keep writing. u rock!
dani xoxo

Thats awesome (not that ur upset) that u know all the feelings and adventures i have to endure all the time...

Wow....this is absolutely amazing!!!! the first stanza really stood out for me. you have incredible talent. keep it up!
-xXx-

I like it.you too is one of the great author.i will add you to my favorites ok.thanks anyway for the comment.keep it up :)

Amazing....i love the expression of it

Great work keep it up

I really liked it, it had a dark sense of beauty... and amazing emotion. I would suggest adding some periods and commas for rhythm and to tell the reader the sentence is over, and make your poem look overall nicer. Other then that, it was really good, good job=D

I know what that feels like,
Lately I have been pretty depressed and people keep asking if I'm alright so I keep saying I'm fine because I don't want them worrying

This poem is absolutly awesome!
it shows so much feeling and emotions
5/5 excellent
~pip xoxXxox

Wow deep. I like it. So parts in there reminds me of me. (does that sound right?) The part when it says I'm smiling on the outside, Pretending nothings wrong, I'm lying to myself, But it's gone on far too long. 5/5.
-Vino

Hey good poem. I liked the rhyming scheme good job. I'm sorry I don't know what too say and that I have such a bad comment, but this poem is excellent in every way. It has perfect rhymes, size, flow, format, and length.