Comments : My Illusion

  • 15 years ago

    by Solace

    Very nicely written. I loved the way it flowed and your choice of wording is amazing. 5/5 none to less.. xx:

    *> : PainOfOne -- blaine

  • 15 years ago

    by FAKE-is-the-new-trend

    GREAT poem i really enjoyed reading it!

  • 15 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Brilliant poem great flow and expression

  • 15 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey beautiful em! loved it like I Loved ALLL your poems. but this one... had just such a great flow and meaning and wording it was just great. I really love ur writing hon keep it up! luv ya *hugs*

  • 15 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey beautiful em! loved it like I Loved ALLL your poems. but this one... had just such a great flow and meaning and wording it was just great. I really love ur writing hon keep it up! luv ya *hugs*

  • 15 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey beautiful em! loved it like I Loved ALLL your poems. but this one... had just such a great flow and meaning and wording it was just great. I really love ur writing hon keep it up! luv ya *hugs*

  • 15 years ago

    by oldthings

    Great poem, great flow.. it seems everyone has that problem of hiding who they really are and how they feel. thanks for sharing =)

  • 15 years ago

    by RedRose

    The use of imagery and metaphor is detailed yet simple to understand it is brilliant. well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Spammy

    Wow that's amazing i know exactly how you feel :\ this is an awesome poem :]

  • 15 years ago

    by MissSideways

    That's so awesome! it flowed beautifully. bit depressing but thats what makes it beautiful. nice choice of words. keep writing. u rock!
    dani xoxo

  • 15 years ago

    by Luke

    Thats awesome (not that ur upset) that u know all the feelings and adventures i have to endure all the time...

  • 15 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Wow....this is absolutely amazing!!!! the first stanza really stood out for me. you have incredible talent. keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 15 years ago

    by eliza austria

    I like it.you too is one of the great author.i will add you to my favorites ok.thanks anyway for the comment.keep it up :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Katie

    Amazing....i love the expression of it

  • 15 years ago

    by RObC

    Great work keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by Megadrive

    I really liked it, it had a dark sense of beauty... and amazing emotion. I would suggest adding some periods and commas for rhythm and to tell the reader the sentence is over, and make your poem look overall nicer. Other then that, it was really good, good job=D

  • 15 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    I know what that feels like,
    Lately I have been pretty depressed and people keep asking if I'm alright so I keep saying I'm fine because I don't want them worrying

  • 15 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    This poem is absolutly awesome!
    it shows so much feeling and emotions
    5/5 excellent
    ~pip xoxXxox

  • 15 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Wow deep. I like it. So parts in there reminds me of me. (does that sound right?) The part when it says I'm smiling on the outside, Pretending nothings wrong, I'm lying to myself, But it's gone on far too long. 5/5.
    -Vino

  • 15 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Hey good poem. I liked the rhyming scheme good job. I'm sorry I don't know what too say and that I have such a bad comment, but this poem is excellent in every way. It has perfect rhymes, size, flow, format, and length.