I really liked it, it had a dark sense of beauty... and amazing emotion. I would suggest adding some periods and commas for rhythm and to tell the reader the sentence is over, and make your poem look overall nicer. Other then that, it was really good, good job=D
15 years ago
by Alex Marlatt
I know what that feels like,
Lately I have been pretty depressed and people keep asking if I'm alright so I keep saying I'm fine because I don't want them worrying
Wow deep. I like it. So parts in there reminds me of me. (does that sound right?) The part when it says I'm smiling on the outside, Pretending nothings wrong, I'm lying to myself, But it's gone on far too long. 5/5.
Hey good poem. I liked the rhyming scheme good job. I'm sorry I don't know what too say and that I have such a bad comment, but this poem is excellent in every way. It has perfect rhymes, size, flow, format, and length.