My secret love

by Switchblade89   Nov 21, 2005


Don't think I stole this poem from Guitarplayer152, me and guitarplayer wrote this poem together.....

It smells like heaven when you walk by,
but I get too nervous to say hi.
So everyday we pass, but dont speak,
which in the end makes me feel so weak.
Cause I see you, and wonder if it can be,
a beautiful relationship between you and me.
I just can't figure out the way to tell you
if the way I feel for you is really true.

I don't know why I get so nervous in your presence,
it might be because of your powerful essence.
It could also be bad thoughts about what you'd do
if you ever found out that I really adore you.
I just wish I could tell if this is real
and hope you find out the way I feel.
I just don't want a broken heart by someone that I've never met,
which is why I keep my feeling for you a secret.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lovely

    Really love the emotion...really heart felt...

  • 18 years ago

    by emmaroo

    Hello your a real good writer and this is very good
    5/5,
    thankyou for your comment it was real sweet
    xxxxxxxx
    emmaroo

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    :P...I read this 2...lol...I'm gonna vote for you 2...

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Aww i loove it. rly good ryming and i loved the way it flowed. xxLISSA

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Awesome i think its a great poem and i think u should tell mat i think so. actualy i'll tell him myself. neway great poem. loved it, and if its real you;ll regret it more if you dont do anything about it