Mesmerize

by Qyzex   Nov 21, 2005


Mesmerize
Bloody, beaten, and all but out.
Fear is what it's all about.
Show them up, make them scream!
Don't kill them though, this aint a dream.
Make them squirm, make them cry.
Terror shall rain from the crimson sky!
VooDoo this and VooDoo that.
Much more scary than some magic hat.
Doom their fates, doom their life!
Put them through your pain and strife.
Forget not, this dream of hate.
For when you wake, you meet your fate.
Pain and hate, suffering abound.
listen to that tragic sound.
The screams and shouts cry out.
For something that they can not doubt.
You are great, you are wise.
And you will be their demise.
For your beauty, none can lie.
it could mesmerize even I.

and so it has.....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    I loved this poem. " mesmerize even I. " Amazing. Defiantly a 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care xx:

    blaine *> : PainOfOne