Comments : SURv¥vER

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    I loved it keep up the good work!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    I can relate to this poem so much... great job, hun! Keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Hey girl..well...I notice that you often use slang words in your poems...although they are not in the slang poems...well...this is just my opinion...I think it's better if you write the whole word...when you write a poem...instead of 2...write to...oh well...whatever suits you...just saying what I think...cause it will look better that way...neway...this is good...

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    To true hunni u keep pushin on nice poem! xox rc