by Jayashantha Nov 23, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Once when I was a kid, |
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Thats a very touchy question?? nice poem and very nicely said!! all the best |
by Ariana
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The comparisions are good, but I'd recommend working on making it sound a bit more poetic. |
by Jayashantha
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I really love this poem |