Im Sorry
by tinkerbell Nov 23, 2005
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I'm sorry that we always fight. sometimes we want to hit each other with all our might. But i hope you know that i love you with all of my heart even if you and dad part. |
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18 years ago
Short sweet and to the point i like it but make it a lil longer well later
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18 years ago
by LadyPearl
Good start, try to make it longer and in poetry format. Keep it up
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18 years ago
by amy
Well it is short but i think it has alot of feeling to it.. i would take this and make it longer.. tis good but it needs more,, but tis good...and for your advice on good poem writting try using stats like a best like when u wrote songs.. like count ur sylabols.. itll work much better... please vot on my poems if u have time.. and get back to me.. write comment for em if u would like.. good job keep it UP!
