Chilling Death

by xEmmax   Nov 24, 2005


Desolation, isolation

A cold gust of icy wind

So sharp

It cuts

Like a knife

Chilling your body

Freezing your mind

Selfishly unkind

You are breaking

So cold

You are shaking

In terror

Until it numbs your head

In a state of bliss

Unable to move

You lay, dead.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brook

    Awesome poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Matters

    Sorry I haven’t commented in a long while. I’m actually grounded from the computer (grr) for two weeks. I really can’t comment, and I hardly have the time to submit poems. I am so so so sorry. The only way I’m even sending you this is from at school, so feel lucky. =) Anyways, gotta go. I’ll be able to comment again on 12/7/05. Be prepared for the best comment yet!

    -Matt

  • 18 years ago

    by PatheticLittleGirlxx

    Dats so great babes i hearts it

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    Yea i agree with kate hall, the setup really like added to the poem , amazing, i am so jealous of you lol everyone loves your poems and you always have like a zillion comments, but of course it is all because your ana amazing writer, you should most deff be on the top rated poems for everysubject you write , and youshould be on it everyday lol

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Thanku guys, luv u all xxxxx