Would.....

by ~DyingBlackRose~   Nov 26, 2005


Would anybody notice if I slit my wrist?
Would anyone notice that I'm hurting inside?
Would anyone notice if my heart is broken in too?
Would anyone notice if I committed suicide?

Would anyone care if someone killed me?
Would anyone care if I was raped again?
Would anyone care if my boyfriend broke up with me because of you?
Would anyone care if I got pregnant?

I know you wouldn't care, because you won't even let me see my boyfriend.
Just because your's didn't work doesn't mean you can ruin mine.
If something happens between me and my boyfriend again.
You won't be seeing me around.

And it's all because of you.

~I know its crappy but if anyone could help me fix it would be great and I would really appreciate it. If you help me I'll comment on 2 of your poems.~

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  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Girl why so sad and i would notice big time i hate for anything bad to happen to you i love u lots i hope your ok .. ~ASH~ and i'll see what i can do with the poem. i'll let you know if i come up wiht anything 5.5