Warped and Twisted (2)

by Brittney Follett   Nov 26, 2005


This is my very first poem I have ever written.

Climbing out of hell
with my wings on fire
back into this world
of darkness and desire
flying up to heaven
just to be forbidden
this crime I've committed
is still unforgiven
I'm wandering in this place
warped and twisted..

Flying through this world
tortured and hated
everything i see
is what i have created
what i have to be
in front of my peers
is not the person i am
its to inspire their fears..

My love and desires
have been fed into hells fires
My body is warped
my spirit is twisted...

Copyright Brittney Schmelter

---------- 12-19-06 -----------
New Version

Climbing out of hell,
With my wings on fire,
Back into this world,
Of darkness and desire.

Flying up to heaven,
Just to be forbidden,
This crime I've committed,
Still goes unforgiven.

Anger runs inside me.
My hands are fisted.
I'm wandering in this place,
Warped and Twisted.

Flying through this world,
Tortured and hated.
Everything I see,
Is what I have created.

Death, destruction, hate.
I'm leading them towards fate.
Their death is coming fast.
They will die at last.

My love and desires,
Are laid in Hell's fires.
My body is Warped,
My spirit is Twisted.

(repeat from my last one i just wanted to see if ppl would actually read it again...)

Copyright Brittney Follett

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This was a nice and dark poem!
    You did a good job on it...
    i love the part "Climbing out of hell
    with my wings on fire"

    Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    I really like this.
    It is short but to the point.
    Well done. 5/5

    >black&&blue

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    Hey I finally read your comment. I didn't really know how to take it though. I mean yeah some people do read my poems because of my name. But others read them because they've become some of my good friends because over the past year we all built strong friendships. And for the famous thing I'm far from it.

    Anyways I love this poem, the wording and the flow it's.. Amazing. I don't know how else to describe it. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care. xx:

    blaine *> : PainOfOne

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