Comments : Monarch Butterflies

  • Wow...i love this...and i feel the same way a lot of the times...keep up the wonderful job and i can guarantee u that u will find ur soulmate...when u least expect it...5/5...and i would like to thank u 4 ur comment on my poem....i appreciate it...keep the poems comin...

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    I love this poem... it's very creative and beautiful. Keep up the amazing work, hun! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Faeries can give you butterflies.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    A good piece of writing. i liked the message you was putting across. my favorite stanza by far was 'They flutter by like two stars winking
    They made a good couple, and that started me thinking
    Where was my friend, where was my lover
    Where was my future, where was my other'
    it was brilliently written.

    Brad

    P.S. thanks for commenting on mine

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    What a beautiful piece. very well written. great j0b 0n this 0ne. t0uching lines. heartfelt p0em!! well d0ne! keep it up!
    l0tz 0f l0ve/d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    Nice poem very beautiful

  • 18 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Awww thiz poemz so beautiful!!!! i lyke ur use of wordz n thiz iz a unique poem i havent heard nethin lyke it keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennie

    It's such a good description...I can almost see the butterflies myself.......what a beautiful image.

  • 18 years ago

    by Flying Phoenix

    Damn that was amazing!!! I loved it so much! Your imagery and whole structure of the poem was just great.

    Keep it up

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Firooz

    We love it........

  • 18 years ago

    by Pedro

    Good

  • 18 years ago

    by unstated affinity

    Nice one but actually i will prefer that you would made the ending abit better.. anyway good job..