Hey!!! I think your poem has a lot of meaning. It is very good, and i enjoyed reading it. Nice job..keep it up. Feel free to read mine. Mine are kinda sad also. Most of them are about my son!!!!!

Hey!!! I think your poem has a lot of meaning. It is very good, and i enjoyed reading it. Nice job..keep it up. Feel free to read mine. Mine are kinda sad also. Most of them are about my son!!!!!

That... was so beautiful! I am not sure I love this line *I hold my wrist, because of you,
So can't you just make me your boo?* But other then that I loved it! it was so touching... and I can relate to it=) it has so much deep emotion... its just... beautiful!

Also I tried to comment on shocked but the site logged me out when I went to see it, it was very good! I loved it! 5/5 for both!

Wow!!! i ahve never read a poem with soo much meaning keep up tha good work !!

Pretty good. :o)

Michelle

Dat wz pretti gud...!! :)

Wow great poem i loved it !!!!!!!!

Wow you continue to amaze me with your writing... your very good at it and every poem i read of yours is better than the last one... i really liked how you wrote this one! its so emotional and i love every word of it! you are definelty being added to my favorites! nice job!

sammie

Omg!!!! i feel the same way...excellent work! wonderful!

please read my poem: please hold me tight, and you might relate somewhat to how i feel....

if you ever need anyone to listen, i'm here for ya! ok? don't forget.

lots of love and hugs, always,

michelle