I cant wait till the day we meet

by ~*×FaÐ3D‡‡M€mØ®Ïê§×*~   Nov 27, 2005


I wish you were here to hold me tight,

i wish you were with me everynight,

i wanna be with you night and day,

i wanna be with you in everyway,

you really mean the world to me,

your the only one i want for me,

your so special and so sweet,

and i cant wait till the day we meet.

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  • 17 years ago

    by emmerz

    Hey this was cute. the only suggestion would be :
    you really mean the world to me,
    your the only one i want for me.

    if youre rhyming, it sounds better if the rhyming words are different than the other. like if you put
    "youre the only one i want to see"\
    or something like that, i think it would sound better
    but still 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by breanna

    I love this one your a really good writer!!! keep it up i am new at this so i am glad you think i am good!! i have had realtionships like this one b4!!!

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