Comments : Lay There Motionless

  • 18 years ago

    by HighPerfection

    I can realate to you know im always here to talk huggs stay strong gurl!

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    Awww...a very nice poem..even though it was sad..it was very deep and full of emotion i Loved it...thank you for commenting on my poem..thank you for the compliment on my Name..Im very sorry for your loss..if you ever need to talk im here Just PM me..ok..Love Joclyn

  • 18 years ago

    by The Spirit of Ash

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    Wow, I really loved your poem. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    Omg... that was beautifully sad.. :( makes me want to cry... and right now thats not so good since i just recently got back into being happy again!!! i pray and hope to god that you have not gone through this, and if you havent i hope that you never have to!!! im here for you tho either way... so if you ever need to talk, i have an ear for you to talk into and a shoulder for you to cry on and a heart that will feel for you!! im really good at listening.. not as great at talking.. but no matter what i will always be here!!! till the day i die.. im not like most ppl! trust me, i know!!

    XOXOXOX
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    Oh by the way... my screen names for aim (if you ever want to talk) are cutelovepancake and brattlovepancake
    and you already have my email address... lovecutepancake@hotmail....
    so yeah im me if you have aim, id love to talk to you!! :) im a friendly person!! in a non sexual kind of way... lol

    XOXOXOX
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Your poem was really good, it bought tears to my eyes, I can really relate to this poem in more ways than one, if you ever need to talk im here for gurl.

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Oh my gosh, is this true? were you really raped? oh, and my poem too late isn't true. i was just really deppressed one day, so i wrote it. but yeah, if i ever want to talk, i'll email you. anyways, excellent poem. i loved it. 5/5.
    **lisa**

  • 18 years ago

    by ~me~

    Wow thats kinda just how im feeling. i hope life works out for you
    stay happy
    theaxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding Mascara

    Wow touching

  • 18 years ago

    by ...Wanna-be Poet...

    Hey, Awesome poem, I loved it =]

  • 18 years ago

    by ...Wanna-be Poet...

    When i say that, I mean that it was really powerful and greatly written

  • 18 years ago

    by Amber

    That poem is proper good... wish mine were that in depth ... gd wrk :)
    xoxo AmBeR xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Kerstin

    Im glad you care. You seem to know exactly what im going through. Well i care too.

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychil

    You're a really good writer, I can relate to your words..I know we don't know each other, but if you want to talk you can email me or just leave a comment. You're a very strong person for writing all these feelings down. And thanks for leaving me a comment.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I havn't read this yet this is a resonse to my heaven is a fairytale poem. DUDE IT'S A POEM!!!!!!!! how many times do i have to freaking say that most of my poems aren't based on anything?!?! i'm not angery and i don't want u to be angery at me either but can i just get this point across?!? i've said it many times and i decided i'd just let it slip for a while as u continued to commplement me on my miserable poems and what a horrible life i must have had but they're poems! i take pleasure out of writing them i soke in the sadness but i do not feel it. they're just poems. they aren't from emotions or pasted things. most ppls are and that's y ppl r misled even though in my profile i state that my pomes r basicly untrue things not based off of anyting except for like 6 of them. oh and so ya know u didn't witness any of that jesus christ stuff it's all 2nd person and we have no proof what so ever. i don't want to get in a big conversation about that though because i'll probably upset you and then u'd stop commenting and rating and you're the only one that does that so i would be upset that i upset you not just because of the lack of comments but because i like to know that someone looks up to my work like u do. and i wouldn't want someone like that hating me over religious beliefs. but anyways can u just please understand that those poems come from nothing. they're just poems....there r only so many that i feel r true...but the majority of them r just there..please understand that.

  • 17 years ago

    by Donavin

    Thank you for commenting on my poem wow i took long time u commented like 2005 but anyways i loved this poem its so deep. idk y people say they can relate to the poems where like 90% felt nothing of it. what do they mean thet can relate wat wirting a poem maybe. if u want to talk Plagued_With_Darkness@hotmail.com any time u want to just add me and we can talk about anything so then... well yeah...

  • 17 years ago

    by Donavin

    Wats up with jennifer she writes so much and only got 1 point out that the poems arnt anything 2 do with her... wow and y on this right here?... im so lost y people do things

  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    Strate to the point. ending chang everything. awesoming:)