Comments : Dream inside a dream

  • 18 years ago

    by Richard

    Great poem but no flow relly it was hard to read still good 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Brilliant poem. is difficult to read to start but once you get into it is a great peice.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Nice ending. Leaving something in my mind, very dark and full of intensity.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lanie

    This poem is somewhat scary...i mean fight with god? but i like the way the words were used. you are good...(^-^)

  • Wow, i really liked it !
    The wording is really good and it's very creepy in parts, well done !!!

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by allison

    That was amazing Chad.. You have such an amazign talent with making jsut shivers go through you reading your poems.. good job
    Take Care
    Allison

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Hm.. that was rather fasinating. I would love for that to happen. :D You're probably thinking I'm a freak.. Ah well. Good job none the less.

    -Jennifer.

    Overall Rating: 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    That's a really good poem. Lots of imagery and emotions. Well written, and thanks for sharing. Awesome job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It was off with the flow. And the line "You I worthless, I shout." seems to be missing a word like "You are..." Overall diction good and imagery nice. I love the idea it contains though.
    ~DFTI

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicholas

    Extremely vivid. I kinda liked it. the idea of "A dream I had" was great.

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Nice, a bit violent but good I love it when people write what they want despite what others might think good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Hareem

    Fictive but pretty nice.
    Good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow i love the way you approached that poem...

    LIS

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Wow! That was crazy, really brilliant though. You really deamt that? Gosh if I did I would be creeped out til ever. Wow. Your discriptions were again birlliant and so was the flow of your writing. I have read a few of your poems now and I am really getting to hear your writer's voice. Excellent poem.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    LOVE IT...vrrry intense work there. AMAZING. Keep it up.=)

    Lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Cool, Very vilent and cool.