Jus' whoa!!!! wow, i loved that so much! a mind blowing poem, if i could give it a 100 i would! wonderful and beautiful piece, lookin forward to readin more from u

Aww...I like this poem. U can cry its ok to!!! I cry all the time!! well I like the poem and keep up the great work!
Julie

Hmmm...i think its good but you repeat to much, next time try saying more about it, like go into details about how much you feel =]

Wow good job... guys can cry lol ... keep it up

Wow this is very deep.. I really liked it. Great job!

AWW POOR BABY IT'S GONE BE ALRIGHT

Wow, i like this, can relate

Love it . .
your very talented. . 5/5

This is very good :)

No puedo llorar
estos ojos no me deja
No tengo tiempo para estar tan abajo
así que deje esta tinta llores por mí

Im triste que su no alrededor
pero no puedo llorar
así que escribo sobre ti
Quiero morir para estar con ustedes
Pero no puedo
Sé que tu no me lo permite

Estoy tratando de luchar contra estos pensamientos de muerte
Tengo que vivir no puedo resistir
Tengo que seguir escribiendo para siempre
pero quiero que estemos juntos
mi mente me está diciendo a morir
pero no puedo
No puedo morir hoy
por lo que continuará llorando pensó que estas palabras

I can't cry
these eyes won't let me
i don't have time to be that down
until i left these tinted tears for me

im sad that he's not around
but i can't cry
until i write over you
i want to die so i can be with them
but i can't
but you won't let me (last line i don't understand it i might be wrong)

I'm trying to fight against these thoughts of death
i have to live i can't resist
i have to keep writing forever
but i want us to be together
my mind is telling me to die
but i can't
i can't die today
but the thing that keeps crying is these words

(dude i know spanish but on some i could be wrong darling lol) :)

oh... that person was making it in spanish lol but either way sweetie the heart will heal and you wrote a rocking poem dude! :) 5/5