Five Words

by Ben   Nov 29, 2005


Three strong words,
followed by two.
If you do not know them,
I will give you a clue.

I have wanted to say them,
afraid of what i'll hear.
My heart almost screams them,
the meanings so clear.

Those five words,
that i have rarely spoken.
Can cure anything,
a heart that's broken.

If you still are unsure,
why i am making you wait.
I cant wait any longer,
I simply must state.

The first three"I Love you,"
such an easy claim.
Not when spun together,
because the second two are your name.

Just wrote it down one day. Tell me what you think.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    Awww it's sooo cute just aww
    really flows well with a really sweet meaning behind it just awww it made me smile to read it :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    How endearing. 'Twas rather delightful to read, indeed. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jason Rainey

    I like it. The last stanza is my fav. It buids up to a point and gives a very good ending.
    Keep writing! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    G O R G E O U S poem!!!!!!! I'd love to have someone write something like that for me. So sweet!!! Good on you.
    luv jess xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by l.M

    This is an amazing poem ! simplistic, short and very cute! plz comment on mine..

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