To be truthful, I read your profile and I didnt expect you to be this good. That was magnificent. Incredibly sad, but so well written...Infact I can't believe you wrote it. I wish I could vote more then once, you'd get a million 5's. I myself have tried that a,b,a,b, rhyme scheme and it's hard. Saying 'well done' doesn't even cut it...*speechless*

Awesome poem!! this line kindof struck out to me

"Theres a hole in his arm.
Thats where the money goes."

i loove it! keep up the great work.
-xXx-

Excellent poem...way too real..you can feel being that person..A+++

THAT WAS AWESOME your a really good poet and i love your writings keep it up 5/5

Woah that was good. 5/5
~*Who Cares?*~

Wow..amazing.
Really hit home this one because ive been so close to ppl with a drug addiction, and u've captured the hopelessness and dependancy on it really well.
take care
>torn -x.x.x-

So far every poem i've read from you has been amazing and this definatly is one of your best
I love how you wrote what happened to him afterwards as well
Great job 5/5

What can I say that hasnt already been said?
I really quite honestly thought this was more then amazing, You have great talent dear.
xxx

Hey babe....That is such a excellent poem. it has soo much feeling. I hope you continue your loving work. ;) Hit up my poems.