Great message! "love" doesn't come only once but true love will eventually come. just keep at it! moving on is the best healing tool. great write!

~Jacklyn

That was really cool. I really liked the form. Choka is really great because it has so much more emotional cling.

Great poem my friend...you're one in a million. Your writing is just so beautiful. I wish to become as good as you some day. Thank you so much for your sweet comment. I missed you guys too. Thank you and always keep it up. Take care my friend.

Nice work Steve - I liked it... I'm going to take a shot at that style of poem. Never done it before. will be interesting to be held to rules and still try and come up with something that sounds OK... keep up the good work.

I thought it is a ok poem,
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Wonderfully done Steve!!!

Beautiful write! I loved the concept and style. Diction and flow flawless. Very eloquently articulated!!

I look forward to read some more.

Kisses
Hayley