White Roses

by Jacklyn   Nov 30, 2005


Winter's rose begins to bloom
Green fades into myth and dream
Windows kissed by seasons change
Animals hide and sleep within

Shadowing the warmth of Earth
Replaced with huge, fire of love
Children glow of Christmas hope
Days grow short, deepening roots

A frosting of spirit across the world
Blooming white roses upon the trees
The most celebrated birthday
Filled with excitement and white roses.

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  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    A frosting of spirit across the world
    Blooming white roses upon the trees
    The most celebrated birthday
    Filled with excitement and white roses.

    ^ my favorite part. this poem really embodies the depth of winter. I love everything about this poem... I love the snow, the spirt and white roses. winter is my favorite season.

    Beautiful job!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Great job Jacklyn....this was beautiful. I truly enjoyed this piece more than you can know....

    Love Ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Very well written! The imagery is flawless, as is the flow! I really like the whole "Green fades into myth and dream" line, just lovely!
    However, I found this line to be kind of awkward:

    "Replaced with huge, fire of love"

    It kinda broke the flow, but that may just be me. I'm not sure if you meant "Replaced with a huge fire of love" or "Replaced with huge fire's of love".
    Anyway, wonderful piece! Keep it up~Holly

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