Beautiful poem, really good 5/5! luv xxemxxx

I really loved reading this poem, it brought a tear to my eye. if that sounds stupid then its probably cause i'm real emotional right now...lol but you did very well
luv em

Hey great poem,5/5 if this is real i think everything will work its self out and that its really sweet that u r gonna be der 4 that person..im sure he/she is thankful for u kindness....shy comments from and lots of love JoSiE.....

Wow i absolutely love this poem. it just sums up so much of what i feel , great work:)xxx

The Sleeping Ugly searches thee ocean depths and wanders in the lonely corridors of souls to help the violetraven, yet indeed she finds herself caught in the web of grief and can only offer her words of song to comfort you. I hope you are able to help this lost soul and the soul within you.

Love The Sleeping Ugly

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I hope so too.

Really really nice work. I like the optimistic message despite the sombre tone. I also like how you've set this out, with the strongest lines in their own stanza, it makes the whole piece flow well. Nice piece!

Hey, this was a very noble poem in my mind. you'd do all that for one person, but u can't. it's sad, meaningful, and compleetly remarkable. excellent work.

-Suzie

Omg... you are one of the most talented writers on this site. I love this poem, it's so original and perfect. Great job!!

I saw your quote and gave it a 5 and that led me to your poems. I empathize with you, even though I'm older, and ought to be wiser, love is a stumbling block that come like a roller coaster - ups and downs all the way. Hey, well done I love your honest style of writing.

That was a really beautiful poem. great work and thanks for your comment on my poem.

Luv Chantelle