Bitter Love

by [in love]   Nov 30, 2005


When you dumped me I want you to know
You played w/ my heart swung it to and fro
Took my soul and set it free
Now I want you to see my wrists
When you come and cut me down
From that board
With a rope around my neck
And a note apon my dress
In distress
You did what it said
Dug my grave
Dug it deep
W/o a peep
6 feet long
10 feet deep
Went home not a word to your parents was said
They came up stairs
Saw you there
Found you how I was when you found me
And w/ the same note
You hung by a rope
Just like me you see

~*Love can be bitter....for he liked me and idk it*~

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  • 18 years ago

    by ImmortalKitty

    This piece shows true emotions. You used great sentence structure and it slows nicely. Great job

  • 19 years ago

    by Marcus

    I have gave a 5 on noones poem since I been at this site, but this poem deserves it!! "Kudos" it reminds me of at poem I wrote called "NO LOVE" and also "Bitter Love" check some of my work out if you like it do add me to your favorites

  • 19 years ago

    by Luke

    That's Soo Deep.. And Amaizing.. It's Well Good!

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